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Most importantly, we need to find a solution to reduce this number of jellyfishes. Students in a Japanese high school wanted to help and find ideas to control them. One way, since humans can eat jellyfishes, they suggested to cook the jellyfishes and turn them into a caramel candy. In this way, people and sea fishes will get less effects and control the number of jellyfish. Here is a fun fact did you know that ‘’Some species of jellyfish can release up to 40,000 eggs daily” that why there are so many of them in the sea’s, and beaches .