Answer: Do you have the translation in english?
Explanation: There are many errors and i can't understand what most of it says.
Answer: ¡Hola! Empieza a mi casa. Luego dobla izquierda y segur hasta carreta veinticuatro. Dobla derecha y sigue derecho hasta el semáforo luego dobla izquierda a Sonic. Compra limonada de fresa y papas fritas.
I made a couple edits in your directions, but there were no big mistakes from what I see. There was a missing upside down exclamation mark before Hola and "Vientecuatro" should be veinticuatro. "Semaforo" was missing an accent over the "a" and should be changed to semáforo. The directions themselves were a little choopy, and don't flow very much, but it's understandable. I believe Sonic is the name of something, if not, please correct me. But besides those things you did very well.
The Direct Translation of what I typed is: Hello! Start at my house. Then turn left and go up to cart twenty four. Turn right and go straight to the stoplight then turn left on Sonic. Buy strawberry lemonade and potato chips.
If that's what you meant to say then everything should be okay.
