The answer(s) are
The paragraph has supporting evidence, however, it does not say how a parent's behavior influences their children's beliefs and value system. The reader does not know how parent's choices will affect the children. The paragraph has a topic sentence, the first sentence, which tells the reader that the paragraph will talk about the choices parents have regarding their children's interests. The paragraph is focused and easy to understand. Finally, it also does a good job of maintaining the reader's attention.
